Wednesday, April 30, 2008

Finished


Actually, I finished my screenplay Monday night. Two days earlier than the deadline - certainly surprising myself considering that April 22, I was still on p. 24. It is the definition of a first draft - riddled with plot holes and in major need of a rewrite. I wouldn't dream of letting anyone read it. But I printed it out today, all 101 pages, and it was hefty and substantial, and I showed it to one of my classes (because they asked if I had finished), and it was good. The weight of it in my hand, something I created: that was good.

After I finished it, I cried. What a funky little response. I screamed a little first, just a short one, but then I cried. And then I took yesterday off and slept. All. Day.

With that, I bid sayonara to my first Script Frenzy (oh yes - I will do it again,) and say hello to my new life as an aspiring writer. Because now I know that I can do it. All it took was some silly little internet contest to make me take that step.

As you can tell, all eloquence is out the window. I used it all up in my moving, poignant dialogue. (um, no.) As one of my co-Frenzies wrote, the last 30 pages of his story are some of the worst, fluffiest dialogue ever written.

Yeah, that sounds about right.

Peace out.

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hooray!!! This is awesome. You are awesome...honestly. Well done!

Anonymous said...

Hey!! Well done!! You must feel so proud and relieved and....exhausted! Congrats!

Anonymous said...

Way to go Carlen! I'm so excited for you! Can't wait to read the polished version.

Anonymous said...

Wow!!! Are you kidding? 2 days early? That is unbelievable, but not surprising actually, knowing the author. :-) WAY TO GO
can't wait to celebrate with you- with a bottle and lots of time to hear more
love j

Anonymous said...

fantastic, C!!! La Ha to celebrate?